Opening Line

Posted by Bruce - in Blog - No Comments

writing-a-book-1 writing-a-book-2    I’m considering writing a book about the most traumatic experiences of my life and already have several thoughts on the opening line. I believe it is a book that needs to be written but I’m not sure I have it in me to write well at least I have the 1st line…. I think.  COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS ARE WARMLY WELCOMED. 

OPTION 1

Murder seeped through my very heartbeat and burned my soul as I needed to seek justice until a new light shine upon me.

  OPTION 2

Life appeared anew in one moment and then appeared to end in the next all because of a despicable lie meant to rip apart my very being.

OPTION 3

At that moment I envied death for at least there would be an end to the anger and pain that burned through me as if I was a pig slowly roasting on a spit.

 

 

 

 

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